November 23, 2024

The Blank Page?



Fear of a Blank Page

In the New Yorker magazine, once I'd come across a hilarious cartoon of Herman Melville, author of Moby Dick, sitting at a writing desk with a mass of crumpled sheets of paper on the floor around him.  Each of those sheets had sentences that just weren't working out. "Call me Jim" "Call me John"  "Call me Alexander"  etc.  How long did it take Melville to get to that remarkable first sentence?  "Call me Ishmael." From that first line, the novel has us in its grasp.  

Beginnings are sometimes difficult. Often a writer might not know where to begin a story.  You simply begin moving your pen or moving your fingers on the keys. Maybe you begin with a description of a person, a place or a thing.  It might be terrible writing. Actually it is hard to tell if it is terrible or just all right or even if it's good when the writer becomes afraid it was all a mistake. It's difficult to endure that feeling.  It's easy to crumple up that page with those early words and toss it in the trash. Start over.  Start over again. And again.  

The best advice I had ever received was this:  "When you are telling the story to your friends, listen to how you begin.  Start writing there."  This helps. Start with oral storytelling. A writer might start a story way too early on paper, long before the actual events in the story. In other words, start with action.  Start with a phrase that catches the listeners' attention.  

The other piece of advice is: keep writing. Keep writing even if the writing is not that great. You might have to get something down on paper before you realize where the story is heading.  In other words, the beginning words might simply be priming the pump. It's only after you get flowing will you have good writing.  Then you can go back and cut the preliminary work.  

Another piece of sage advice:  It's much easier to revise than to write.  So don't worry about your poor writing, faltering plot, inconsistencies, shifts in verb tense, etc. etc.  Once you have the bulk of the work done, then you can go back and fix it.   

This is well illustrated by this excerpt from the short story, "Bushes," China Miéville writes:

He took out a notebook and charcoal to make marks and every time he had to strive against the blankness of a page. He would be still and tell himself that he had already ruined the book so that was that, now, and it being too late to save it, he could continue.

Now that's a good thought.  The blank page is pristine as new fallen snow. It is an inviting possibility of perfection.  Reassure yourself that anything you put on that page is like you stumbling and dragging your feet, wandering about wildly and crookedly, and falling down face first. I like this approach.  Miéville assures us with the thought that any mark made on that page will not be perfect.  It's too late. You are now not perfect, and you are excused. It's no big deal. Right?  It was never going to be perfect anyway.  Just carry on. Accept the facts. Keep going.  Maybe the story won't be perfect, but it might be good.  

Maybe it's best to start working on scratch paper, on the back of envelopes, on grocery lists, or scribbled recipe cards, or on the back of your children's drawings. 

Does that help? I'm curious about what helps you. Feel free to comment.  

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For more information about this speculative writer who Ursula LeGuin called "brilliant," check out the author interview published in the Boston Review
https://www.bostonreview.net/articles/literature-culture-china-mieville-strategy-ruination/

November 7, 2024

Artist Conversations: Sarah Ruhl

"Certain words, when you put them together, create a kind of melody...."  says Sarah Ruhl, playwright, writer, and writer. 


Playwrights' Center's Director of Fellowships Lynde Rosario sits down with multiple-award-winning playwright and MacArthur-certified genius Sarah Ruhl for a conversation that is as electrifying as it is wide-ranging. Topics include: collaborations, caregiving, perseverance, pandemics, politics, poetics, the epic and the domestic, finding a home in the arts, and the beautiful present of the theater as the key to its future. If you’ve ever wished for a seat at the table with incredible artists in passionate discussion, this series is your seat. 

 SARAH RUHL is an award-winning American playwright, author, essayist, and professor. Her plays include Eurydice; In the Next Room, or the vibrator play (Pulitzer Prize finalist, 2010); The Clean House (Pulitzer Prize finalist 2005, Susan Smith Blackburn Prize 2004); Passion Play (PEN American Award); Orlando; and Letters from Max (based on her book with poet Max Ritvo). Her plays have been produced on Broadway and across the country as well as internationally, and translated into fourteen languages. Her books include Smile: The Story of a Face, and 100 Essays I Don’t Have Time to Write. She is the recipient of a Whiting Writers Award, a PEN Center Award for mid-career playwrights, a Steinberg Distinguished Playwright Award, and a MacArthur “genius award” Fellowship. She teaches at the Yale School of Drama and lives in Brooklyn with her family.




August 3, 2024

Some Poems in a Different Genre


I'm always interested in fiction writers who do interesting things with the form of a story. One such writer is Icelandic, Jón Kalman Stefánsson.  I loved his newly translated book, Your Absence Is Darkness. The form of the novel has taken on a pattern, musical and certainly poetic. The pattern isn't exactly repetition, but resonance.  It's sort of like the difference between a metaphor becoming a transforming metaphor.  Music is a part of the stories in this generational saga, since some of the characters are literary and some are musicians.  Also, we do get to know what's on this author's Spotify channel, Death's Playlist.   

I look forward to more of his works becoming available in English. His book The Fish Have No Feet was nominated for an International Book Prize 2016.  Here's a quote from Heaven and Earth, due out in English translation in February 2025.  I've borrow the quote from a book review of this upcoming novel.  

“Some poems take us to places where no words reach, no thought, they take you up to the core itself, life stops for one moment and becomes beautiful, it becomes clear with regret and happiness. Some poems change the day, the night, your life. Some poems make you forget, forget the sadness, the hopelessness, you forget your waterproof, the frost comes to you, says, got you, and you’re dead.” (p.85). 


July 29, 2024

Why do art or writing?

Is it useless, the time you spend writing things that you realize are likely not to be published or read by many or any?  The feeling is common to most writers and artists.  

What art does is to coax us away from the mechanical and towards the miraculous. The so-called uselessness of art is a clue to its transforming power. Art is not part of the machine. Art asks us to think differently, see differently, hear differently, and ultimately to act differently, which is why art has moral force. Ruskin was right, though for the wrong reasons, when he talked about art as a moral force. Art is not about good behaviour, when did you last see a miracle behave well? Art makes us better people because it asks for our full humanity, and humanity is, or should be, the polar opposite of the merely mechanical. We are not part of the machine either, but we have forgotten that. Art is memory — which is quite different [from] history. Art asks that we remember who we are, and usually that asking has to come as provocation — which is why art breaks the rules and the taboos, and at the same time is a moral force.

—Jeanette Winterson, author of Oranges are Not the Only Fruit

quote from her memoir, Why Be Happy When You Could Be Normal?
Photograph of Winterson by Michel Delsol








June 19, 2024

Exhibition: Mine - What Is Ours in the Wake of Extraction

Exhibition of Art & Video

(this exhibition includes my poetry video, My Geology, a poem from Night Train Red Dust: Poems of the Iron Range)

September 3-December 13, 2024

February 4- May 15, 2025

University of Delaware, Mechanical Hall Gallery



https://exhibitions.lib.udel.edu/mine/

April 9, 2024

Image & Poetry

 

Images are a crucial component of poems. 


“Images are not concepts. They do not withdraw into their meaning. Indeed, they tend to go beyond their meaning….If the image that is present does not make us think of one that is absent, if an image does not determine an abundance—an explosion of unusual images, then there is no imagination.”


Gaston Bachelard, French philosopher, 1884-1962l 



April 4, 2024

Moving Words: Writers Across Minnesota




Join Us for Moving Words


Thursday, April 25, from 6:00-7:30 p.m. 

Aitkin Public Library 

110 1st Ave NE

Aitkin, MN 56431


Sheila Packa and Kao Kalia Yang 

https://thefriends.org/event/moving-words-writers-across-minnesota-aitkin/


The program will last approximately an hour and a half, with a conversation and/or reading followed by
a question-and-answer session.


Listen to the writers on these radio conversations: 

https://www.mprnews.org/episode/2023/04/17/duluth-poet-sheila-packa-shares-her-favorite-poetry

https://www.mprnews.org/episode/2024/03/29/kao-kalia-yang-channels-her-mother-in-the-memoir-where-rivers-part

April 1, 2024

MINE: What is Ours in the Wake of Extraction Exhibition Opening September 4, 2024 University of Delaware


Good news! My Geology, a poetry video, has been accepted for the exhibition this year: MINE: What is Ours in the Wake of Extraction

https://vimeo.com/101956156

Exhibition Opening: 
University of Delaware, Mechanical Hall Gallery 
September 4th, 2024 - December 13,  2024  

An interdisciplinary multimedia experience bridging art and science to address climate and environmental justice issues by amplifying the voices of underrepresented communities impacted by extraction.

MINE draws parallels between geographic locations with a shared extractive impact. 



January 17, 2024

A Song Cycle: Surface Displacements

Poster

The Weber Music Hall stage
Composer Wendy Durrwachter created a song cycle for the title poem in my book, Surface Displacements. It premiered on Saturday January 13, 2024 at the Weber Music Hall on the University of Minnesota Duluth campus.  

The songs were performed by soprano Jennifer Lien while Ms Durrwachter played the piano, and the music reflected the landscape of Lake Superior and the waters and landscape of northern Minnesota.  


photo of the creators

 

October 16, 2023

Twin Cities Book Festival 2023

The TCBF is sponsored by Rain Taxi, and it was held in the Progress Center at the Minnesota State Fairgrounds in St. Paul, Minnesota.  Besides 80 exhibitors (Graywolf, Coffee House Press, Holy Cow! Press, Minnesota Press, Magers & Quinn Bookstore, St. Paul's Midway Books, the College of St. Catherine, the University of Minnesota MFA program, Hamline University MFA program, and many other writers and writing-related business, there were several authors reading excerpts of their work through the day's event.  Truly it was the literary event of the year!  

My photo was taken by David Beard for the Perfect Day Duluth website.  The photo of Mary Bode and Julie Gard was taken by me. The two were representing the Lake Superior Writers organization.